请教：2009年英语四级（CET-4)考试新题型预测试卷（1)第1大题第1小题如何解答？

【题目描述】

第 1 题Directions :For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A letter of Consolation. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

假设你是李明，给地震灾区的学生写一封慰问信，鼓励他们树立对生活的信心，努力学习，好好活下去。

A letter of Consolation

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【我提交的答案】：First,i want to tell you the life is

【参考答案分析】：审题：本题要求写一封慰问信。写慰问信的重点是要鼓励灾区学生重建对生活的信心，同时鼓励他们好好生活下去。态度要诚恳．用词要准确．注意写信的格式．

（思路一）第一段对地震灾区学生的遭遇表示同情和慰问；

第二段重点提出政府将克重重困难帮助他们，同时鼓励他们；

第三段表达自己对他们所能给予的帮助。

【范文一】

A letter of Consolation

May 26,2008

Dear Friends，

I was deeply saddened to(1)learn of the great loss of lives and extensive damage caused by the sudden and deadly earthquake in your provide．(2)As for what you have encountered in the earthquake，1 would like to extend my sympathies to all of you(3)who affected by the earthquake，and my condolences to the families of the Victims.

(4)Although you’ve lost your homes and even your parents，you still have another mother——China．Our motherland has mounted swift relief and rescue efforts.And I am confident that our motherland will be able to tackle the challenges ahead and that all of you will return to schools in the shortest possible time．(5)As a result。please don’t(6)worry about your future very much and just(7)focus 011 your study．And I'm sure a bright future will(8)wait for you．

My Other classmates and I have donated some money to(9)assist you in reconstructing your homes．(10)However hard it is．we will still stay with you and help you？

Best regards!

Yours，

Li Ming

【点评】

(1)“知道，了解"

(2)“就…方面来说”

(3)who引导的定语从句，修饰you

(4)although引导让步状语从句

(5)“因此”

(6)“担心”，为主题短语

{7)“集中精力于…”

(8)“等候，等待”

(9)“帮助某人做某事”

{10)however引导让步状语从句

【思路二】第一段对地震灾区学生的遭遇表示同情和慰问；

第二段说明有了政府和其他人的帮助，他们没必要对自己的状况过分担心；

第三段表达自己的美好祝愿．

【范文二】

A letter of Consolation

May 26,2008

Dear Friends，

I am terribly sorry to(1)know about the terrible situation(2)caused by the earthquake happened in the l2“of May in your province．And l would like to express my sympathies to all of you，and my condolences to the families of the victims.

When v叫miss your parents or close friends died in the earthquake and(3)feel frustrated．you should(4)bear in mind that Our government and other Chinese people are still trying their best to help you．And I believe that all the difficulties ahead will be overcome and all of you will return to new homes In the near future．So don't(6)be worried about your situation，you will have new houses to live in and new schools to study in．(7)What you need do is only to(8)forget about the past and(9)concentrate OH your study．

I hope l will see your big smile Off your face again and your life(10)returns to normal．coon．

Best regards!

Yours．

Li Ming

【点评】

(1)“知道，了解”

(2)caused引导的过去分词短语，作后置定语，修饰situation

(3)“感到沮丧”，表达灾区学生的糟糕心情，

(4)“记住…”

(5)“在不远的将来”

(6)“担心，忧虑”，为主题短语

(7)what引导的主语从句